tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post4683239629041757915..comments2023-11-14T03:13:43.700-08:00Comments on Worditude: LAI NOUVEAUindybevhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-72148317556753835162019-05-10T12:37:46.778-07:002019-05-10T12:37:46.778-07:00Very clever and witty, Bev!Very clever and witty, Bev!purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-41846998723092013662019-04-27T00:59:28.533-07:002019-04-27T00:59:28.533-07:00Oh... that guy will never win her heart I thinkOh... that guy will never win her heart I thinkbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-57746601359357745232019-04-26T20:56:13.391-07:002019-04-26T20:56:13.391-07:00p.s. this is Jade Li at http://tao-talk.comp.s. this is Jade Li at http://tao-talk.comms_lilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03999098267891256848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-53529269041592173762019-04-26T20:55:41.786-07:002019-04-26T20:55:41.786-07:002nd time trying to comment. I like your light-hea...2nd time trying to comment. I like your light-hearted approach here. It works well for this form.ms_lilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03999098267891256848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-42039115958467889042019-04-26T14:25:54.211-07:002019-04-26T14:25:54.211-07:00Good one, Beverly....this form is made for a humor...Good one, Beverly....this form is made for a humorous approach!JIm Feeneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754509821434474479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-91747856482247183052019-04-26T13:15:34.745-07:002019-04-26T13:15:34.745-07:00See, this was superb. Great rhyme and humor and w...See, this was superb. Great rhyme and humor and wit as usual. Nice job.Sabio Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12963476276106907984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-79594144316966720372019-04-26T13:05:31.164-07:002019-04-26T13:05:31.164-07:00I like how you let the meter guide this form as we...I like how you let the meter guide this form as well as the rhyme.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-3641696358213249962019-04-26T08:37:00.418-07:002019-04-26T08:37:00.418-07:00Brought a big smile to my face! Lovely Bev!Brought a big smile to my face! Lovely Bev!Linda Lee Lyberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669367010600000396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-21554458262566516172019-04-26T06:52:42.221-07:002019-04-26T06:52:42.221-07:00I like your poems. The first one sums up my feelin...I like your poems. The first one sums up my feeling as well. Writing for form alone is not very inspirational. You did very well on the second one. They both flow nicely!Dwight L. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07992133580674047782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-23395610153510916752019-04-26T01:30:43.276-07:002019-04-26T01:30:43.276-07:00Gung ho! Another humorous one :)Gung ho! Another humorous one :)Jane Doughertyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14700193165487305298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-61879695337854249142019-04-25T22:57:51.743-07:002019-04-25T22:57:51.743-07:00I agree that the lai’s rhythm is quirky, Bev, and ...I agree that the lai’s rhythm is quirky, Bev, and as I said elsewhere, it’s a bit stilted, but you’ve made me smile with yours, especially ‘I lai’!Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-86613733668808650512019-04-25T17:44:42.401-07:002019-04-25T17:44:42.401-07:00Good luck with the maiden. A fun lai Bev - glad y...Good luck with the maiden. A fun lai Bev - glad you tried something new. I am not with good with forms myself so I am writing out of my comfort zone. Thanks for the smiles. <br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.com