tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post5711940719654836875..comments2023-11-14T03:13:43.700-08:00Comments on Worditude: REALITY.indybevhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-34514667183691548062018-10-02T13:12:23.410-07:002018-10-02T13:12:23.410-07:00I like how the last line was so real and contraste...I like how the last line was so real and contrasted the first carefree descriptive part of the poem.Amayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214963251505201287noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-15983437144400367332018-09-29T18:21:46.921-07:002018-09-29T18:21:46.921-07:00Becoming a parent has its traumas (and joys).Becoming a parent has its traumas (and joys).Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-60442883908184037052018-09-29T16:25:44.303-07:002018-09-29T16:25:44.303-07:00I had to look up the lyrics to Springsteen's &...I had to look up the lyrics to Springsteen's "The River", as I was not familiar with it. You're right, of course, this story is very like that … and undoubtedly like that of too many young teen parents. Thank you for your comments, Bjorn.indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-72427405211747252472018-09-29T14:17:04.124-07:002018-09-29T14:17:04.124-07:00This is such a strong tale... somehow I feel like ...This is such a strong tale... somehow I feel like you are telling the same story Bruce Springsteen sung about in "the River"brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-43279884088137292332018-09-29T11:42:58.047-07:002018-09-29T11:42:58.047-07:00Such a common tale, Bev. I love the description o...Such a common tale, Bev. I love the description of his life on the walls.purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.com