tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post6144715379553865485..comments2023-11-14T03:13:43.700-08:00Comments on Worditude: VOYAGE OF THE MARY KATHERINEindybevhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-20695247403332313652020-08-18T12:09:19.932-07:002020-08-18T12:09:19.932-07:00Thank you, Lillian. I've always loved reading...Thank you, Lillian. I've always loved reading about such mysterious happenings. indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-68723699509987765412020-08-18T12:07:49.607-07:002020-08-18T12:07:49.607-07:00...and of the navy flyers who disappeared in the B......and of the navy flyers who disappeared in the Bermuda Triangle (which I wrote about some time ago). I love these mysteries.<br />indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-89442166189598634542020-08-15T09:12:38.884-07:002020-08-15T09:12:38.884-07:00Oh my! I read it a second time...this time aloud. ...Oh my! I read it a second time...this time aloud. You've told the tale so very well here. They rhythm, the mystery....it's almost like and old sea salt's tale being told on the pier. Just wonderful!lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-6210053996852704032020-08-13T11:38:46.646-07:002020-08-13T11:38:46.646-07:00I love a poem like this... such a classic feel wit...I love a poem like this... such a classic feel with all the details...<br /><br />Wonderful rhymesbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-71377691402593499742020-08-13T10:01:02.308-07:002020-08-13T10:01:02.308-07:00Nothing like a sea-faring mystery and ghost tale t...Nothing like a sea-faring mystery and ghost tale to shiver me timbers! Well-done, Bev. Loved it. Mother Wintermoonhttps://sacredsoulsongs.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-61441285572716625172020-08-12T18:26:05.333-07:002020-08-12T18:26:05.333-07:00I loved this so much Bev. I’ve always enjoyed st...I loved this so much Bev. I’ve always enjoyed stories of those old sailing ships and your poem of mystery was perfectly written 🥰Poetry for Healinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06998366697778789164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-60428174651197741672020-08-12T14:52:39.396-07:002020-08-12T14:52:39.396-07:00Well done, told as if a spell.Well done, told as if a spell.Ken Gierkehttps://rivrvlogr.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-36720203149369903762020-08-12T14:49:07.956-07:002020-08-12T14:49:07.956-07:00A salty mystery. Nice. Luv the rhymes
Much✏love
A salty mystery. Nice. Luv the rhymes<br /><br />Much✏love<br />Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-24240530676053074912020-08-12T12:25:58.783-07:002020-08-12T12:25:58.783-07:00Beautifully written. You captured the adventure an...Beautifully written. You captured the adventure and danger of ocean voyage way back when.Imeldahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00477386880496665001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-14220555435713020442020-08-12T12:05:01.572-07:002020-08-12T12:05:01.572-07:00Beautifully done Beverly. This poem reminds me of...Beautifully done Beverly. This poem reminds me of the Malaysian flight that disappeared and never returned!Dwight L. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07992133580674047782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-36148784787014744702020-08-12T11:34:07.432-07:002020-08-12T11:34:07.432-07:00Jane, I think the Mary Katherine, the Marie Celest...Jane, I think the Mary Katherine, the Marie Celeste and the Mary Celeste are one and the same. The story has been told and retold many times. I love the tales of ghost ships, and I picked up the name as Mary Katherine somewhere in my searches. indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-5449964131939980022020-08-12T08:32:38.027-07:002020-08-12T08:32:38.027-07:00Another mystic ship. Reminds me of the Marie Celes...Another mystic ship. Reminds me of the Marie Celeste. And I agree with Sarah, a ballad form is the best for this kind of subject.Jane Doughertyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14700193165487305298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-21522772738067323192020-08-12T06:04:19.740-07:002020-08-12T06:04:19.740-07:00OOOOOOOOOH. You told a mystic tale through genius ...OOOOOOOOOH. You told a mystic tale through genius lines weaving. Beautiful!A Reading Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12229414372642627877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-67069993735104633102020-08-12T00:50:01.507-07:002020-08-12T00:50:01.507-07:00A tale full full of mystery, well told with beauti...A tale full full of mystery, well told with beautiful poetry! "Aye, the ship was seen, A phantom ship" really liked that line.Mrityunjay Dixithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07941995454390645789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-62416653936257011902020-08-11T20:32:41.572-07:002020-08-11T20:32:41.572-07:00Intriguing story, Beverly. There is a feeling of ...Intriguing story, Beverly. There is a feeling of being at the mercy of the water when land is no longer in sight. Just about anything can happen!Jade Lihttps://tao-talk.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-59909601708289740392020-08-11T18:47:11.003-07:002020-08-11T18:47:11.003-07:00Now I'm curious about this ship. The rhythm an...Now I'm curious about this ship. The rhythm and tone of your poem suits the tale and the time well, I think. D. Averyhttps://shiftnshake.wordpress.com/2020/08/11/come-sail-dversetuesdaypoetics/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-75663994383153732212020-08-11T17:29:09.520-07:002020-08-11T17:29:09.520-07:00Perfect form for a seafaring tale. Still a myster...Perfect form for a seafaring tale. Still a mystery, like the ocean itself. Kerfehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14679460865016032660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-31373397499746600362020-08-11T13:19:49.498-07:002020-08-11T13:19:49.498-07:00I love your use of rhyme and rhythm in this - it g...I love your use of rhyme and rhythm in this - it gives it an antique feel. I can imagine it being recited in a wintry bar by the sea. What a strange thing to happen, though. Very mysterious. sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01756314170839177900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-22795906668094303312020-08-11T13:19:45.971-07:002020-08-11T13:19:45.971-07:00Wow, very beautifully written and indeed mystifyin...Wow, very beautifully written and indeed mystifying. It is one of those stories that reminds me of the mystery in the world itself. So many paradoxes and things left to the unknown, you can create a short story anthology. This poem in particular reminded me of a time-traveling ship; the ship at sea went briefly back in time. Do I believe this? I'm a skeptic but a pure lover of mysteries at heart. Just as the vivid tale you've expressed with grand prosody, it is as they say: that life is not a dream... but rather a mystery. Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11063946141142298896noreply@blogger.com