tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post7454496148065857191..comments2023-11-14T03:13:43.700-08:00Comments on Worditude: THE DRUMindybevhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-3624718121250922292020-06-28T15:45:37.488-07:002020-06-28T15:45:37.488-07:00The drum that wouldn't quite be silenced. Yes,...The drum that wouldn't quite be silenced. Yes, this is slightly over 44. Did the title count? :) <br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-22633536001976866022020-06-23T10:02:06.019-07:002020-06-23T10:02:06.019-07:00I love the story and the way you have expressed it...I love the story and the way you have expressed it. I enjoyed reading your poem.Nithya Venkathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719032256454517459noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-67684043789275582352020-06-23T08:35:21.054-07:002020-06-23T08:35:21.054-07:00absolutely loved this haunting story!
absolutely loved this haunting story!<br />dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-34584947932429663352020-06-22T15:56:00.644-07:002020-06-22T15:56:00.644-07:00Vivid--I feel like this is something that I should...Vivid--I feel like this is something that I should have heard under an oak when I was younger. :) C. Sandlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15616902831506982429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-52134305197999987002020-06-22T07:22:29.194-07:002020-06-22T07:22:29.194-07:00Bravo! i loved this. Great story, Great write!Bravo! i loved this. Great story, Great write!Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08954810869812900099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-67402794445931685002020-06-22T04:41:28.378-07:002020-06-22T04:41:28.378-07:00I love the story you wove.
I did some of the dVer...I love the story you wove.<br /><br />I did some of the dVerse quadrilles some years ago. Rereading those poems now, I find them rather slight. Some people do wonders with the form, but that particular length doesn't seem to work for me.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-22750107293640620832020-06-22T02:28:41.313-07:002020-06-22T02:28:41.313-07:00Trees have so many stories, if only we could hear ...Trees have so many stories, if only we could hear them all. This one is so sad. If only the fair maiden had heard the drum, it might not be sounding now.Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-85393342930391811322020-06-21T20:31:18.755-07:002020-06-21T20:31:18.755-07:00A haunting. A tale that I feel I read in a storybo...A haunting. A tale that I feel I read in a storybook with illustrations.colleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16669375650785054059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-84825900731751774072020-06-21T15:48:27.756-07:002020-06-21T15:48:27.756-07:00Thank you for sharing, Bev. You penned a good stor...Thank you for sharing, Bev. You penned a good story-poem! <3 Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09054732378669659210noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-36711063719133728422020-06-21T15:44:12.384-07:002020-06-21T15:44:12.384-07:00Ahh--this is a beautiful and wistful write--it hau...Ahh--this is a beautiful and wistful write--it haunts--Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-91231794198790949092020-06-21T15:09:41.903-07:002020-06-21T15:09:41.903-07:00A sad tale probably heard across many years and ma...A sad tale probably heard across many years and many cultures. I do like your version with old oaks someday telling their stories of drums at twilightJoel (@Stranded Tree)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00088694600301047120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-86447153694305962632020-06-21T10:42:42.627-07:002020-06-21T10:42:42.627-07:00Magical! I am certain that oaks hold stories that ...Magical! I am certain that oaks hold stories that only the listening hearts can hear.Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-19006720230429022002020-06-21T10:36:43.017-07:002020-06-21T10:36:43.017-07:00This is heartbreaking. I know memories are all we ...This is heartbreaking. I know memories are all we have after a major loss, but... I wonder how much pain the sound of that ghostly drum brought to her heart. Then again, I guess their love story never died. So, there is some comfort on that.Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-59280849661040364922020-06-21T10:16:27.628-07:002020-06-21T10:16:27.628-07:00I'll always listen for stories told by the tre...I'll always listen for stories told by the trees. The see quite a bit more in their lives than we do.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-37948570739165722112020-06-21T10:13:17.611-07:002020-06-21T10:13:17.611-07:00OMG! the story just breaks my heart. But i luvved ...OMG! the story just breaks my heart. But i luvved reading it.<br />Thanks for dropping by my sumie Sunday today<br /><br />Much💖loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-72178131859945106312020-06-21T09:58:38.234-07:002020-06-21T09:58:38.234-07:00This is absolutely riveting, Bev! I so admire the ...This is absolutely riveting, Bev! I so admire the excellent rhymes throughout the poem 💘Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-45231046824214474232020-06-21T09:51:36.295-07:002020-06-21T09:51:36.295-07:00What a wonderful story you thus weaved inspired by...What a wonderful story you thus weaved inspired by the drum! Namrathahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459190888629470886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-59393762713520821232020-06-21T09:24:17.704-07:002020-06-21T09:24:17.704-07:00Wistfully wonderful poem. I can see why 44 words w...Wistfully wonderful poem. I can see why 44 words would not have 'done' it.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.com