tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post8097953411834967282..comments2023-11-14T03:13:43.700-08:00Comments on Worditude: MOMENT IN TIMEindybevhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-24242889733794275882021-03-25T08:01:12.903-07:002021-03-25T08:01:12.903-07:00Yes, I see it very clearly... the fall colors comi...Yes, I see it very clearly... the fall colors coming through as the season changes. I like how you incorporated life into the abstract with your grandchildren and husband! Well done Beverly! Love your ending!Dwight L. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07992133580674047782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-48977117489288865512021-03-24T11:59:06.697-07:002021-03-24T11:59:06.697-07:00I love this. Absorbed in color!I love this. Absorbed in color!Mary Hoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17528465484642169618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-30294170478678510032021-03-24T07:19:09.391-07:002021-03-24T07:19:09.391-07:00I love the regularity of your lines here and how y...I love the regularity of your lines here and how you tease the colours and forms out into such poetic images!Ingridhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01349081971668298252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-21683148746266841052021-03-24T01:53:38.810-07:002021-03-24T01:53:38.810-07:00I didn’t look at the painting until after I wrote ...I didn’t look at the painting until after I wrote the first part of my poem and I too saw all the seasons in it, Bev. I love the phrase ‘pristine silence of snowstorms’ and ‘nuances of blue in skies’. A poem that appeals to the senses.Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-4736772437056853252021-03-23T16:31:47.038-07:002021-03-23T16:31:47.038-07:00I like how you give the colors sensory association...I like how you give the colors sensory associations that bond you to them. JadeLihttp://tao-talk.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-78549305294613253882021-03-23T15:15:42.253-07:002021-03-23T15:15:42.253-07:00I love what you saw in the colors, I love how ever...I love what you saw in the colors, I love how everyone will see something completely different. Abstract art is like that ... brava, Bev.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-8894979834125115332021-03-23T13:55:56.450-07:002021-03-23T13:55:56.450-07:00This is beautifully done, Bev!💝 I admire all that...This is beautifully done, Bev!💝 I admire all that you have envisioned here especially; "smell of green in Spring/colors in Mother's garden."Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-34340577287426980532021-03-23T13:50:21.303-07:002021-03-23T13:50:21.303-07:00Funny how color evokes memory of time and place an...Funny how color evokes memory of time and place and person. You capture it so beautifully here.Dorahttp://jollybeggar.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-75448181494451049652021-03-23T13:29:35.995-07:002021-03-23T13:29:35.995-07:00I love the same turn as Laura, maybe seeing the co...I love the same turn as Laura, maybe seeing the color of nature in that twinkle is a perfect metaphor for lifelong love.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-156773205591631053.post-15166842606389373422021-03-23T13:27:25.991-07:002021-03-23T13:27:25.991-07:00this is a lovely ekphrastic - you see so much in R...this is a lovely ekphrastic - you see so much in Richter - and I liked the that surprise line "twinkle in my husband's eyes" <br />p.s. the ekphrastic was one of the choices - nothing wrong here Laura Bloomsburyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00904500767566869311noreply@blogger.com