the topic word “murmur“. My
muse seems to be on sabbatical of
late. Perhaps she, too, is weary
of Winter!
Submitted to dVerse
February 12, 2018
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murmur me Springtime
sing softly green
whisper golden daffodils
mumble distant shower approaching
mutter raindrops on my window
excite me with earth’s fragrance
immerse me in soft forest sounds
sprinkle me with some stardust
surround me with bird song
soothe my winter-weary soul
I love how you have used all the gentle sounds in this... wonderful
ReplyDeleteAll of those gentle, soft verbs make me ridiculously happy.
ReplyDeleteoh yes....the murmurs of spring. Would that its tread be a bit heavier and quicker in Boston! Through the ice patches on our sidewalk a little sun must pass :)
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful! And you've given us the formula to turn you into putty😂
ReplyDeletemurmur me springtime... lovely
ReplyDeleteThis is absolutely breathtaking!!💖
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like Spring is in full bloom with all her chorus, murmuring, muttering, mumbling and all. A musical treat!
ReplyDeleteNice last line. I am ready for spring and today was rather warm.
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful poem - yes, Murmur me springtime. Lovely imagery.
ReplyDeleteI agree with De about the soft verbs! Lots of gentle sound and movement in your Quadrille, Bev; it's raindrop-fluid and spring-scented!
ReplyDeleteOoh, lovely images of spring, although I can't say my soul's winter-weary. To the contrary, we need an extended winter into June this year or we'll be crying come wildfire season!
ReplyDeleteLove the gentle sound of this, like a lullaby that calms a child. :-)
ReplyDelete~Imelda
what a super selection of verbs to awaken us to Spring - especially like "mutter raindrops on my window " -
ReplyDeleteFalls onto the page like delicate fragranced rain. Stunning.
ReplyDeleteYes. I like how this sounds. Winter can be so quiet.
ReplyDeleteLove this peaceful nature prayer.
ReplyDeletelovely
ReplyDeleteMNL (Cactus Haiku)