Tuesday Poetics and our challenge is
to write confessional poetry. I fall
short of the eloquence of others here;
nonetheless, my heart speaks.
Submitted to dVerse
January 15, 2019
*************
Once I stood atop the mountain
Mistress of all I surveyed
How sweet to survey my kingdom
It seemed I’d so dearly paid.
But I slipped from the promontory
Which it seemed I had only just gained
And I found I stood in the valley
With the mountain before me again
I vowed I would conquer the mountain
It seemed I’d climbed time after time
And, grasping familiar handholds,
Once more I began to climb.
*************
Digital art is my own.
I admire your determination to begin to climb again. Those familiar handholds are a great support Bev.
ReplyDeletebeautiful digital art. your poem speaks to lessons and toil. glad that the handholds are at least familiar when you start climbing again...
ReplyDeleteVery nice Beverly. Those mountains keep on rising higher the more we climb.! The view from the top is of the Valley you will soon be back in... So true!
ReplyDeleteThose moments, just before the fall, when all feels victorious - well written.
ReplyDeleteLife is a series of mountains and valleys it seems...and I think you were more eloquent than I :)
ReplyDeleteLife is quite a Sisyphean journey. It's admirable to have that determination to climb again and yet again. The familiar handholds shall help us along. Well penned! :-)
ReplyDeleteI admire your determination which shines clearly through your verse!
ReplyDeleteSomehow life can seem Sisyphean... but climbing or pushing a stone uphill seems to be what life is all about...
ReplyDeleteAH, soooo hopeful. and honest
ReplyDeleteKeep trying. There are those moments at the top.
ReplyDeletethe strength to climb again is admirable ~
ReplyDeleteWill and determination is what keeps us going! Life is all about that 'Climb'
ReplyDelete