Monday, July 13, 2020

MOTHER'S ADVICE

dVerse is back from sabbatical, and it’s
Quadrille Monday. The word is “blue”, and
it’s to be used in a poem of 44 words.
It’s good to see everyone back again!
Submitted to dVerse
July 13, 2020

MOTHER'S ADVICE

eyes of blue and golden hair
fetching smile
beware!

eyes of blue and ebony hair
come-hither gaze
take care!

eyes of blue and titian hair
pouty lips
   don’t dare!

son, watch those girls
with their eyes of blue
plainly they’re all after you.

16 comments:

  1. Another enjoyable write, Bev! :)

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  2. How sweet it is!! I am sure he won't mind at all!

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  3. Blue eyes do have that reputation!

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  4. I guess Mother believes only us brown-eyed girls are to be trusted, then...
    What a great take on the prompt!

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    1. Aren't you glad the word this week was blue and not brown?! Personally, my momma should have warned me about brown-eyed men. I learned a hard lesson there!!

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  5. Nice. I am a brown eyed old gal. How should i write myself😊
    Much💙love

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    1. Write yourself beautiful ... and grateful the word this week was blue!! lol

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  6. Oh, those eyes of blue, Bev! Nice one!

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  7. Bet that was fun to write! It was fun to read!

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  8. Is it okay to have hazel eyes? :)

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    1. Absolutely! My Irish husband had hazel eyes with a twinkle in them.

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  9. I smiled at this Bev. So clever a twist..ha..ha...

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  10. Nice one, Beverly! I enjoyed this immensely 💝💝

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  11. I fell for Momma's first verse! :)

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  12. I like your bit of fun with this prompt. That mother sounds like a bit of a terror though. And I kind of wonder what sonny boy is like. 😀

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