FRIDAY WRITINGS
When I think of food, I think of my grandmother’s chicken and dumplings. On our visits, I enjoyed the entire process. First a fat hen into the pot, simmering away and smelling wonderful. Then putting flour on the great round table, and adding the richest of the juices from the pot until a dough formed. I see her now, rolling pin in hand, rolling out the rich dough, then cutting it into squares which became pillows of delight along with the deboned chicken bits that had been returned to the pot. Then, seated around the great round table, grandpa would say the grace that I recorded in the following poem. Submitted to Poets & Storytellers United, November 5, 2021
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I remember grandma’s kitchen
from those days of long ago
for never king no president
saw such a wondrous show
The smell of grandma’s dumplings
I remember to this day,
and just as surely I recall
Grandpa saying “Let us pray”.
Then, gathered around the table
each seated in our place
large and small we’d bow our heads
as Grandpa said the grace.
“The corn”, he’d say, “is might dry.
Lord we pray you see fit for rain,
and Neighbor Brown is poorly, Lord
We pray you ease his pain”.
And the trails of steam grew shorter
over Grandma’s wondrous bounty
as Grandpa brought before the Lord
each sinner in the county.
He’s finished, surely, I would think.
there is no more to ask…
only to hear to my dismay
Grandpa warming to his task.
“We pray, oh Lord, for wisdom
for the leaders of our land
that they may steer this country
with a sure and steady hand.”.
His burdens laid upon the Lord
Grandpa would finally reach amen.
When heads were raised, forks were poised
all ready to dig in.
Now I know Grandpa’s in heaven
for it is his rightful place
but when God’s hungry, I’ll bet he says
“You set the table, Fred, I’ll say the grace.”
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I see them now, the beloved faces at that table. All passed now into the Great What Comes After, but living still in the memory of those of us privileged to have had a seat at Grandma’s table.
This is such a wonderful memory... and a nice ending!
ReplyDeleteI love that this ended with a giggle. I can certainly imagine a supreme being taking over saying grace, so that everyone could get to the yumminess a lot sooner.
ReplyDeleteYour grandma's dumplings--and the process--sound delicious, Bev.
Oh Bev, how dear this rhyming poem .... tugs at my heartstrings.
ReplyDeleteDinner with the grandparents is such a beautiful and important tradition that I hope we never lose.
ReplyDeleteWhat a nice memory. My grandmother's cooking left something to be desired! On my mother's side, she canned green beans, and served them every single meal when we visited. Fine, but she didn't trust her own canning, and boiled them until they were grey and squishy. Not that doing so would stop botulism anyway. The other grandmother refused to cook much after tasting my mother's biscuits (well, they have won ribbons in fairs for me and my oldest son!)! My mother never made dumplings. Maybe not a CA thing, which we were way back on both sides. I made dumplings for my son to know what they were from the song "She'll be Comin' Round the Mountain."
ReplyDeleteThis is so cute! I love the closing. :)
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“Neighbor Brown is poorly, Lord
We pray you ease his pain”.
And the trails of steam grew shorter
over Grandma’s wondrous bounty
as Grandpa brought before the Lord
each sinner in the county.”
I’m sure this is how our kids feel when we pray over them too.
Oh yummy!
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Such a wonderful memory! And I love the gently humorous ending.
ReplyDelete"Now I know Grandpa’s in heaven
ReplyDeletefor it is his rightful place
but when God’s hungry, I’ll bet he says
“You set the table, Fred, I’ll say the grace.”
oh bev, you are blessing
I had a great grandmother also, her dish that was my favorite was scalloped oysters. We would gather at her house for holiday get-togethers, she made yummy deserts that all of us would eat. Grandma would also cook the rabbits that my father killed, I wouldn't eat one even on a dare. One of our Uncles would say the prayer, I never heard grandpa pray. I heard him cuss a lot though.
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A wonderful surprise ending. You should submit it to one of the magazines like "Guidepost" to share with many others
ReplyDeleteThank you, Joel. I'd never considered aubmitting any of my poems for publication, but appreciate your coment.
Deletewhat a wonderful memory and poem.
ReplyDeletei like how people thank their God for food before their meals. this shows gratitude, and respect for the land.
There's something beautiful in the memory of your Grandma's dumplings. And the image of your family sitting at a dinner table saying the grace before eating, brings back my own childhood memories. But your Grandpa’s generosity; praying for every sinner and hungry God opting to do the grace himself instead had me chuckling.
ReplyDeleteLove your poem! It reminds me of being the guest at a meal long ago where the grace was so long, the food was only lukewarm by the time we got to eat it. **sigh**
ReplyDeleteThe meal sounds delicious. I'm sure the eating took far less time than the grace. I love the ending as well.
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