FRIDAY WRITINGS ... I indulged in word soup for fun, I love the magic of words, dribbling from fingers to keyboard in an endless stream of pleasantries, mysteries, subtleties, vignettes, and curiosities. The songwriter, Willie Nelson, says the air is full of melodies, just reach out and grab one. Same is true of stories ….. the words are all there, just reach out and grab some. If you ever feel like you were in the wrong place at the wrong time, this poem may be for you. You just may be unlikely enough to qualify…..or not. I just reached out and grabbed some words! Submitted to Poets & Storytellers Friday Writing, January 28, 2122
WORD SOUP
Common sense, good sense, nonsense,
And those who have no sense at all
Well dressed, Sunday best, over-stressed
And those who are late for the ball
High heeled, well heeled, ears peeled
Listening for the final call
Bellicose, verbose, grandiose
And those who are exceedingly small
Not here, wrong door, my dear
It’s the first door down the hall.
I'm thinking of the Talking Heads 'Stop Making Sense' and how your words here see like magnets. Some are drawn to each other and some are related but repel.
ReplyDeleteI'm not familiar with The Talking Heads. Have to look that up. Thanks for your comment!
DeleteWhat beautifully coherent nonsense! LOL.
ReplyDeleteA delicious soup of images. I enjoyed reading aloud. It was particularly fun with hand gestures (or like my Piano Man calls it, "that reading dance thing" I do).
ReplyDeleteFun poem !
ReplyDeleteThanks. It was fun writing it!
DeleteThere is an intoxicating rhythm here and I love it! Cheers.
ReplyDeleteWhat fun word play!
ReplyDeleteSo much fun to read, Bev!
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