My muse hit the road, and I fell
into some sort of celestial Brigadoon.
Submitted to Poets United
Poetry Pantry
July 23, 2017
I dreamed I rode a rainbow to
just beyond Somewhere, in the
land called Neverness.
In my skiff with gossamer silken sails,
I skimmed the River of Forgiveness
to the shore of Lake Serenity at the
foot of the Contemplation Mountains.
I hiked up Mount Awareness and stood
at the peak, surveying the Valley of
Wisdom.
On the way down, I had a sip from
Compassion Falls and partook of the
fruit from the Tree of Success.
I heard the melodious call of the Bird
of Paradise and …… WAIT! It’s not
the bird, it’s my alarm clock.
Well, damn!
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* Picture is my own digital art.
Rude awakening. (but delightful poem)
ReplyDeleteYes, a delightful poem!
ReplyDeleteWell I was dancing out of Eden until you hit me with the wake up call to what we have inherited. Another wonderful and interesting piece.
ReplyDeleteZQ
Bev I adored this fairy tale dream interrupted too soon...I agree so very delightful!
ReplyDeleteDonna@LivingFromHappiness
Well, I love your muse's travels!
ReplyDeleteSuch a delightful read!
ReplyDeleteI was loving this journey so much, till the alarm went off. What a neat twist at the end of the poem! Left me grinning. But a rude wake-up call, after such a lovely journey.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this journey, Bev! I am still hiking up Mount Awareness...hoping that when I reach the summit I will understand!
ReplyDeleteI hate it when my lovely reality turns out to be only a dream!
ReplyDeleteThis was so beautiful and dreamy...I enjoyed it until you were awakened. I love how you included those terms that are inspirational for the soul. God bless and Happy Sunday to you!
ReplyDeleteHow I laughed out loud with that damned alarm clock ringing. This was so good!
ReplyDeleteA inspired piece of writing - unique and wonderfully crafted. The close is pure delight. A pleasure to read!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the dreamy tone, and laughed at the ending. Good writing,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
That's right..too good to be true!!! :)
ReplyDeleteSuch a rich silky softness in every word before that alarm clock disaster :)
ReplyDeleteYour opening line truly set up for a magical poem
ReplyDeleteA delightful piece!
ReplyDeleteThis is most creative in word and art.
ReplyDeleteI think that might have been a good dream to get out of! But it made a good yarn.
ReplyDeleteHa! I hate it when that happens. :D Very fun read.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully sketched and imbued with such a serene, reposeful ambiance. And once gain: wonderfully rhymed!
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