Poets United Midweek Motif challenges us to present an outdoor scene honoring April.
Looking out my window at the budding trees, I'm reminded of Wallace Stevens' poem
"13 Ways of Looking at a Blackbird", and I've adapted the idea for an oak.
Submitted to Midweek Motif
April, 2017
It falls from high,
small, brown, inconspicuous,
containing promise of mighty oak
A seedling, roots seeking sustenance
growing strong and tall
fulfilling destiny
Shield from summer sun
dappled shade
on cool green grass.
Natives gather beneath
dense leaves provide shelter
from summer storm
Feathered inhabitants
find welcome homes
and raise voices in song
Now standing sentinel
beside pioneer cabin
amid fresh young dreams.
The child swings
from sturdy limb
happy and secure
In soft rustles of night
a quiet “who who”
of resident owl
Taller still, rooted deep
scarred by time
cloaked in history.
Dressed in colors
glorious red
russet and gold
Now naked in winter winds
limbs akimbo
colors pooled below
Stark shadow cast on snow
like tentacles
seeking warmth
Now tinged with green
bursting with life anew
the cycle continues.
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A beautiful circle.
ReplyDeleteHave a nice Wednesday
Much love...
Nice. You've given reasons not just to look at a tree, but to love it.
ReplyDeleteAh, THIS is the Poets United prompt poem. Sorry for confusion. I like the Wallace Stevens reference very much moving from seed to a wintery nakedness. Very fine.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful life story, a tale of strength and endurance.
ReplyDeletelove how the promise is fulfilled in every way possible...
ReplyDeleteYou have so mystically presented a year in the life of a budding oak. I enjoyed reading about each one of its stages.
ReplyDeletePoppy
In this sequence, it seems you have given us not only this wonderful tree but many aspects of April.
ReplyDeleteI love the image of the child swinging from a sturdy limb. I think I can vaguely recall doing that a hundred or so years ago! :)
ReplyDeleteA well captured scene with vivid images that transport the reader to another world, and back. I like the narrative element, too!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and meditative. Love the details like the pooled colors beneath the bare tree.
ReplyDeleteI like that Wallace Stevens poem. Yours is beautiful! There's such rich color and sound - the changes a tree goes through, the owl...you bring everything to life here.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem, Bev, and within the tree you describe is the whole world and the cycle of life.
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