This week's Midweek Motif challenges us
to consider a grain of sand.
Submitted to Poets United
April 26, 2017
Once I stood atop the mountain
The mistress of all I surveyed
Ah, how sweet to survey my kingdom
For which I’d so dearly paid
Then sands shifted on the promontory
Which it seemed I had only just gained
And I found myself in the valley
With the mountain before me again
I vowed I would conquer the mountain
It seemed I’d climbed time after time
And grasping familiar footholds
Once more I began to climb.
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Perseverance is a valuable trait indeed!
ReplyDeleteGreat metaphor. Life sure does present us with many mountains.
ReplyDeleteSuch well stated thoughts......... a wonderful piece indeed!!
ReplyDeleteReally nice!
ReplyDeletePow! You rocked this! And we have the grace to keep on climbing.
ReplyDeleteReminds me of the Greek myth of Sisyphus . Like the rhythm and the rhyme. Well done !
ReplyDeleteWhat a great analogy for life which give us highs and lows. A really beautiful piece.
ReplyDeleteThis is the journey. So many starting overs.........
ReplyDeleteThe determination to conquer is inspiring. A brilliant metaphor, indeed, to illustrate the ups and downs that are part our daily lives!
ReplyDeletePatience and perseverance is the way to go ❤️
ReplyDeleteAh yes, life's like that!
ReplyDeleteLuv the illusive nature of the sand in Verse 2. There's where the poem pivots, for me. Enjoyed this very much
ReplyDeleteMuch love...