Poetics Tuesday, and we’re asked to consider proverbs poetically. What fun to tell a proverbial story! Submitted to dVerse July 27, 2021
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Among the blind a one-eyed man was king
An empty vessel who made much noise
He blew his own trumpet loudly
Soon he proved appearance can be deceptive
And all that glitters is not gold
A bad workman always blames his tools
And a leopard can’t change his spots
Soon curses came home to roost
And even the blind began to see
Kicking and screaming, he lost his seat
And, unbelieving, denied defeat
The people awoke from the long dark night
They’d learned an empty bag can’t stand upright
An empty bag of...well, I won't say that word here!
ReplyDeleteI amused myself here. So proud I'd managed to write without rhyme, I now see in the last four lines I lapsed into rhyming!
DeleteMegaproverbial work, Beverly! Conga rats!
ReplyDeleteWell said, Beverly!
ReplyDeleteNice collection here. Clever...
ReplyDeleteGood job. :)
ReplyDeleteI like the conclusion, Bev. I'm glad we woke up!
ReplyDeleteThis was great Bev! I loved it and you used so many proverbs. Well done! ☺️π
ReplyDeleteYou covered a myriad of them here Bev — well done! π
ReplyDeletebravo! a proverbial mesh
ReplyDeleteAll of which goes to show, a proverb means all things to all men :)
ReplyDeleteOh, I love what you did with this one. Such a great metaphor...
ReplyDeleteAnd an empty bag full of hot air...does not create truth!
Loving this one!! So funny, you simply must revert to rhyme. And always OK with this reader.
ReplyDeleteHa! Loved this Beverly!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done, Beverly!! ππ
ReplyDeletethat last line is so epic, Ms. Beverly!
ReplyDeleteWell done! All those proverbs lead to truth!
ReplyDeleteMy Bev! You brought in the whole bunch of beautiful ones. One just can't help but see the wisdom underlying each of them. You relate them so smoothly between them!
ReplyDeleteHank
This says so much about so many. We all are prone. Love it!
ReplyDeleteThis was fun to read - it read rather like a fragmented fairytale :-)
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