word is FLUSH, which we’re to
use in our poem of exactly 44 words.
Submitted to dVerse
April 20, 2020
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on nights
when the sky
is a carpet of stars,
I think of you
and the long ago
flush of golden moments
we shared
before it all went away.
I wonder,
when your sky is a
carpet of stars,
do you think of me?
is a carpet of stars,
I think of you
and the long ago
flush of golden moments
we shared
before it all went away.
I wonder,
when your sky is a
carpet of stars,
do you think of me?
I like the remembrance of old friends through the stars.
ReplyDeleteHow charming. Thanks for dropping by to read mine Bev
ReplyDeleteMuch💛love
"the long ago flush of golden moments"
ReplyDeleteAww...I like the dreamy, nostalgic feel of this and the questioning under a lovely carpet of stars. Thanks for joining in, Bev. Stay safe. :)
Oh, this brings so many emotions and memories and questions. Beautiful!
ReplyDeletethat long gone love that never leaves. <3 beautifully conveyed, Beverly
ReplyDeletePoignant and romantic, Bev! I like the repetition of ‘sky is a carpet of stars’.
ReplyDeleteI like this!
ReplyDeleteSO lovely... I would love to look at stars like this.
ReplyDeleteThe night does inspire reverie.
ReplyDeleteLovely
ReplyDeleteAahh! Memories. If you're gazing and remembering they probably are too😊. Nice write!
ReplyDeletePat
Sweet melancholy piece - has a lovely stillness to it - hinged around the middle three lines.
ReplyDeleteA pertinent question...
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