Monday, April 20, 2020

STARRY NIGHT

Monday Quadrille #102, and the
word is FLUSH, which we’re to
use in our poem of exactly 44 words.
Submitted to dVerse
April 20, 2020
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on nights
when the sky
is a carpet of stars,
I think of you
and the long ago
flush of golden moments
we shared
before it all went away.
I wonder,
when your sky is a
carpet of stars,
do you think of me?

13 comments:

  1. I like the remembrance of old friends through the stars.

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  2. How charming. Thanks for dropping by to read mine Bev

    Much💛love

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  3. "the long ago flush of golden moments"
    Aww...I like the dreamy, nostalgic feel of this and the questioning under a lovely carpet of stars. Thanks for joining in, Bev. Stay safe. :)

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  4. Oh, this brings so many emotions and memories and questions. Beautiful!

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  5. that long gone love that never leaves. <3 beautifully conveyed, Beverly

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  6. Poignant and romantic, Bev! I like the repetition of ‘sky is a carpet of stars’.

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  7. SO lovely... I would love to look at stars like this.

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  8. The night does inspire reverie.

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  9. Aahh! Memories. If you're gazing and remembering they probably are too😊. Nice write!

    Pat

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  10. Sweet melancholy piece - has a lovely stillness to it - hinged around the middle three lines.

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