dVerse Tuesday Poetics, and Merrill has asked us to consider connections in these days of the pandemic. In the midst of it all we moved to a new community and the clubhouse has been closed to gathering. I have been able to connect with a small group of women with a kindred interest in recreational writing, and we exchange our writing efforts by e-mail monthly. Elsewise, Merrill has asked us to consider how we’re connecting words, phrases and lines in our poems. I seem always to think in rhyme, lines tidily complete (I can't seem to conquer enjambment). Today, I’ve been inspired to write a Jabberwockian nonsense poem for a little light relief. Submitted January 19, 2021
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Thunderation and dagnabbit
The obfurcator broke
It’s all wonkily awry
What’s more it’s bespoke
To make matters worse
and confabulate the story
There’s an obvious kink
In the confligatory
The trip may be abandoned
For reasons excomplicit
We’ve searched the profabulary
But can’t seem to fix it
So hail and farewell
We’re stuck-- quarantined
Mayhap we’ll congregate in Valhalla
When we’ve all been vaccined
I enjoyed your Jabberwocky style poem! I think you must had had fun with it. 😀
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you've been able to connect with others in the midst of the pandemic.
Sorry Beverly, you'll have to pick a different venue—no women in Valhalla, only valorous male warriors.
ReplyDeleteGood point. I've always wondered why the list of synonyms is led by "heaven" and "paradise". Hmmmm
DeleteSo much fun... maybe that's what we can do being in quarantine.
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeously rendered, Beverly!❤️
ReplyDeleteVery nice!
ReplyDeleteNice one Bev😁we look forward to vacinated connecting again
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped by to read mine
Much💖love
What a delight to read! Love it!
ReplyDeleteNothing more disturbing than a kinky confligatory.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the liftoid, Beverly.
HaHa...I love aa good nonsense poem. Brilliant Bev! I also love the word 'wonky' ☺️
ReplyDeleteAre we the only writers old enough to recognize dagnabbit? Bet so. This is a delightful romp!
ReplyDeleteI use wonky all the time. And I think I learned dagnabbit from Looney Tunes. Love your funny poem
ReplyDeleteBev, you write humor well. Thanks for the smile..
ReplyDeleteaha! this left me chuckling, Bev. and yes. I hope!
ReplyDeleteha, I loved this, so cleverly and beautifully penned down!
ReplyDeleteOh, excellent, Beverly! I really enjoyed this bit of sensical nonsense!
ReplyDeleteWe must keep our sense of humor!
ReplyDeleteThe logical direction towards working together is so inviting and your group did it better by working on them. A delightful rendition Bev!
ReplyDeleteHank
Such a skilfully humorous splendiferous poem, so sublime about this tumultuous time ...
ReplyDeleteI used to reply to your lovely comments until I realised you wouldn't get notice to read them :(
So glad you are part of my tribe,
enjoyed this joyful ride!
That was a serendipitous read!
ReplyDeleteMade me smile! My day has been a little off but reading this is tilting me back into some sense of balance, haha! Great wordplay!
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful!
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