For this week’s prompt, we're presented with a few poetic names from Bruce Hamana Sosei’s book, 100 Beautiful Words in The Way of Tea, and asked to pick the English version of one (or more) about which to wrap our own words. I've chosen "green shadows" and "go search for fireflies". Submitted to Poets & Storytellers United, January 20, 2021'
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In the forest, among
the green shadows,
go searching for fireflies
as the leaves of the great
oaks whisper age-old
secrets.
Here is peace.
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It sounds like peace too. Mmm... I'm looking forward to summer evening rambles post-pandemic.
ReplyDeletePerhaps the fireflies hold our secrets. Wouldn't that be a delight?
ReplyDeleteYour poem itself is peace
ReplyDeleteEmbarking on such a search is nothing short of sheer magic. There will be great rewards!
ReplyDeleteSounds very nice...
ReplyDeleteI see you are looking forward to summer Hope things get better for everyone over there now.
ReplyDeleteBest done in the dark with a net and a jar for their slow death. But that could be done and with less pain with a can of wasp spray.
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Jim!!! Shock, horror. I'm sure she wasn't searching for them to KILL them.
DeleteI agree with Rosemary. We did catch them in jars, but always with holes punched in lids and grass inside, and let them go after we studied them a while. Fireflies make the night magic. My daughter, who lives in Oregon, rues the fact there are no fireflies there.
DeleteThis magical poem seems nothing short of perfect (to a little-ole Pagan witch-Druid like me)!
ReplyDeleteAh, Rosemary, you're my favorite Pagan witch-Druid for sure!
DeleteOh how I wish I could step into your poem and search for fireflies..sigh
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeous Bev!
ReplyDeleteMade me yearn to see some fireflies. Love this, Bev!
ReplyDeleteForests are a delight to explore aren't they? Where you can meet the birds and animals at home and listen to trees whispering overhead.
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