Saturday, May 22, 2021

GEMINI

 Sunday Muse #161, submitted 5/22/2021


GEMINI


Gemini, Gemini

let me count the ways


star filled nights and sunny days

stormy weather and rainbows

just when I know who you are

you aren’t

carefree frolic and laughter

joys and happy ever after

 until

dark and moody comes to call

immense displeasure over all


Gemini, Gemini

let me count the ways….


15 comments:

  1. We may as well be twins ... follow each other everywhere. A great treatise / poem on the Gemini personality.

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    1. It always amazes me, given our 3 hour time variance, that we frequently post one after the other.

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    2. Kindred spirits ............

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  2. OK, now it let me in? Liked this Bev! 👍

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  3. A wonderful capturing of the true Gemini Bev and the rhyme is the icing on the cake!!

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    1. Thanks Carrie, it started without rhyme and then I lapsed into rhyming, as always happens to me! My brain is hopelessly programmed to rhyme.

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  4. until
    dark and moody comes to call
    immense displeasure over all

    Love that you acknowledge the frequent mood change and great rhyming Bev!

    Hank

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  5. I keep reading this over and over--it feels like a good poem to recite.

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  6. This read like a rhyme. Beautiful rhythm.

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  7. I like the Shakespearean spin you put on this, Beverly.

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  8. Beverly, I am one step behind you, "just when I know who you are you aren’t." Then it is usually to late to comment, but thank you for reading me. I've not been good the last few weeks.
    I liked reading it, I should study up because I have neglected learning about the horoscope things.
    ..

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  9. Beautiful capture of the gemini spirit.

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