Mish requests we feature the word
Spice, as always 44 words not including
the title.
Submitted to dVerse
September, 2017
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Life's variety
Enhancing satietySpice makes our life worthwhile
A dash of curry
When in a hurry
Causes diners to smile
Rosemary and cardoman
Nutmeg and cinnamon
Add to rank and file
Last of all thyme
Spices up my rhyme
Taking care of chyle
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Chyle: A digestive agent
I love this--spice, rhyme and meter all mixed together. Well done!
ReplyDeleteWonderful rhythm and rhyme.
ReplyDeleteChyle(r) led me to Supergirl. :)
ReplyDeleteCurry is always on my to-do list.
~marley
You really did a fine mixing on this poem, part recipe, part paradox. I get a little lost when I encounter cooking-speak though.
ReplyDeleteYummy stuff!
ReplyDeleteSpicy blend, Bev!
ReplyDeleteI liked the sound and sense of these two lines:
ReplyDelete"Last of all thyme
Spices up my rhyme"
spice does make life worthwhile!!!
ReplyDeleteNot only scent and taste but wonderful names as well. Tasteful
ReplyDeleteLove how you weave those spice words in. Well written.
ReplyDeleteA lovely rhythm and rhyme, Bev, like a little song to remember the spices.
ReplyDeleteLast of all thyme
ReplyDeleteSpices up my rhyme
Taking care of chyle
Yes, it certainly rhymes well putting a classic finality to something short and sweet!
Hank
"Spice makes our life worthwhile"
ReplyDeleteYes, a little bit goes a long way. I think of the salt of the earth analogy too.
There is a reason for all spices in food and life. I love the rhyme here.
ReplyDeleteVery, very good! And tasty! Brava!
ReplyDeleteLady Nyo
..spicing up your rhyme with thyme....LOVE this! :)
ReplyDeletePerhaps, spice is part of what is called the "good life?"
ReplyDeleteLove how you draw yourself into the poem at the end there!
ReplyDeleteYes! A little spice can make a difference on our plates and in our lives. Loved the rhyme in this.
ReplyDeleteIt certainly had a lot of flavour, The nutmeg reminded me of making rice pudding.
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