Writers' Pantry #150.  Sometimes dreams are so vivid we don't want to wake up. I had such a one last night. It was wonderful being young again.....if only for the moment!  Submitted to Poets & Storytellers United, March  7, 2021
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I was walking down the street 
on a sunny day 
striding along 
full of youthful 
 exuberance.
 I saw my reflection 
in the shop window--
 back arrow straight 
butt tucked 
stomach in 
chest out.
 I owned
the world! 
 Then I woke up.....
well, damn!
Oh, so lovely, Bev. Who would want to wake up from such a beautiful and vivid dream! I always enjoy the humour you inject into your writings. Thank you for the smiles. :)
ReplyDeleteWaking up is such a downer!
ReplyDeletePop goes that bubble!
ReplyDeleteRelatable! hahaha
ReplyDeleteI've uttered your last line more than once, after a wonderful dream ends. Still, it's good to have them, right? My favorites are the ones where I can run in the woods...
ReplyDeleteAh well, good that our wishes can be fulfilled for a little while and we get to experience those joyful emotions.
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful, personal, funny, wishful thinking poetry! Damn.
ReplyDeleteHaha what a shame you woke up I love these vivid dreams like you experience another reality
ReplyDeleteWe you certainly gave us readers a good laugh!
ReplyDeleteBummer. Even though I'm (almost) never surprised, I still hate waking up.
ReplyDeletegreat dream!...i love this..
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