Grace has presented a new and different format called a Seguidilla, the restrictions of which were a bit beyond me, I fear. Submitted to dVerse 3/11/2021 .
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SEGUIDILLA
How can my words be tailored
To fit the detailed
Demand of minutiae
Excruciating
Savoring springtime
I rise to the occasion
Jubilant am I
I love the transition you can go through with spring.
ReplyDeleteYour voice and your jubilation are both very clear here, Beverly. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI love that volta line, with savoring springtime. Enjoy the season and thanks for joining in.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant, I’d say you NAILED it!
ReplyDeleteYeah, not my cuppa tea, either, Beverly, but you've don't a bang-up job anyway! Salute.
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ReplyDeleteYour volta is the best one yet! :-)
ReplyDeleteSo happy Spring inspired this masterful write! 🌺🌼🌻
ReplyDeleteWell done Beverly. This was excellent ☺️
ReplyDeleteThis is MY kind of poem, Bev - I love the meta'ness! It's terrific.
ReplyDeleteYours,
David
Well done for rising to the occasion: I love the touch of jubilation at the end!
ReplyDeleteAs well you should be! Both for spring and for nailing the form!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful! I love the "savoring of springtime."💝💝
ReplyDeleteWell done, Bev! I found this a tough form.
ReplyDeleteAh, savoring springtime. Let nothing get in the way!
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