Thursday, March 11, 2021

SEGUIDILLA

Grace has presented a new and different format called a Seguidilla, the restrictions of which were a bit beyond me, I fear.   Submitted to dVerse 3/11/2021 .

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SEGUIDILLA

How can my words be tailored

To fit the detailed

Demand of minutiae

Excruciating


Savoring springtime

I rise to the occasion

Jubilant am I 


 

15 comments:

  1. I love the transition you can go through with spring.

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  2. Your voice and your jubilation are both very clear here, Beverly. Well done!

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  3. I love that volta line, with savoring springtime. Enjoy the season and thanks for joining in.

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  4. Brilliant, I’d say you NAILED it!

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  5. Yeah, not my cuppa tea, either, Beverly, but you've don't a bang-up job anyway! Salute.

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  7. Your volta is the best one yet! :-)

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  8. So happy Spring inspired this masterful write! 🌺🌼🌻

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  9. Well done Beverly. This was excellent ☺️

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  10. This is MY kind of poem, Bev - I love the meta'ness! It's terrific.

    Yours,
    David

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  11. Well done for rising to the occasion: I love the touch of jubilation at the end!

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  12. As well you should be! Both for spring and for nailing the form!

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  13. This is beautiful! I love the "savoring of springtime."💝💝

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  14. Well done, Bev! I found this a tough form.

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  15. Ah, savoring springtime. Let nothing get in the way!

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