Thursday, May 20, 2021

THE WALTZ

 Meet the Bar Thursday and our challenge is to consider a poem with the beat of a waltz.  Easy as one, two, three!  Submitted to dVerse May 20, 2021

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One two three
Waltzing, said he
Seeming to float

Round the floor
One time more
Missing nary a note

Wrapped  in her arms
Enfolded in charms
Cares of the world remote.

One two three
Captured was he
Dance is poetic, he wrote.

11 comments:

  1. Dance is poetic and this poem is a dance! The perfect whirlwind romance :-)

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  2. Such a lovely rhythm--definitely a waltz!

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  3. I love such a wonderful dance... if only we could.

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  4. You really captured the beat, made me want to move my feet. Light, frothy and romantic; a fine job.

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  5. Love the dance as it brings the cares of the world away!

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  6. I am quite certain you danced many a waltz, beautifully gliding round the floor, secure in the arms of your lucky partner.

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  7. I love the way the counting keeps the time in your poem, Bev, and the romance you captured with it. I haven’t danced for many years – my husband hates dancing.

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  8. This was excellent Bev. Very alive. I love the pic too. Well eritten my friend! 🙂

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  9. Wrapped in her arms
    Enfolded in charms
    Cares of the world remote

    Love the the act of a fulfilling embrace to cap it all. A great dance routine Bev!

    Hank

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