Haibun Monday. Frank challenges us to recall school days, and I've chosen to extend that to lessons learned when I was a little older! Submitted to dVerse, August 30, 2021
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LESSONS LEARNED
Once upon a time when I was a newly widowed princess, I fell in lust. He was a finely turned, smooth-tongued frog. Not listening to my inner voice, I was convinced my love would turn him into a prince/ (He was already handsome). Time passed, and so did lust…and by the time I recognized the frog for what he was I was knocked off my lily pad and barely able to slosh out of the swamp.
In the midst of lust, I’d purchased a pair of brass swans…the male leading, neck proudly extended and bill pointed skyward; the female followed demurely, eyes cast shyly downward. In all the years after our relationship ended, she leads, cautiously watching for pitfalls and frogs, and he follows with his head in the clouds as usual. On my garden wall, there sits a verdigris frog gazing skyward. I call him “Frog, formerly known as Prince”.
Be careful, princess
Listen to your inner voice
Avoid handsome frogs
A lovely tale and haibun -- full of wisdom.
ReplyDeleteA clever take on a classic! Well-played!
ReplyDeleteLessons learned... frogs are always frogs, they always want to take you back to the swamp
ReplyDeleteYessss. Froggolicious!
ReplyDeleteWow. This is sooo good.
ReplyDeleteHappy Monday
Much❤love
Great haiku to end this cautionary haibun. Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteWell written Bev. For me, the prompt just triggered the current upset and disbelief I am unable to shake.
ReplyDeleteLove the wisdom of your haiku and your fantastic take on the tale.
ReplyDeletewitty
ReplyDeleteA peek into the inner workings of Bev!! I love it.
ReplyDelete"Listen to your inner voice."
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely love this, Bev! (Frog, formerly known as Prince). Too funny!
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