Sunday, October 10, 2021

SAD TALE

 The Sunday Musse #181


SAD TALE

Drucilla wanted to be queen

but alas she was only a pawn

she listened to the bishop and rook

until the knight was gone

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13 comments:

  1. Gillena CoxOctober 10, 2021 at 8:52 AM

    Bravo!!!
    Luv it

    Happy Sunday Bev

    Much💜love

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  2. Sherry Blue SkyOctober 10, 2021 at 10:17 AM

    This is very clever! Loved it.

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  3. Carrie Van HornOctober 10, 2021 at 10:26 AM

    Your sad tale made me smile Bev! Love this!!

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  4. HelenOctober 10, 2021 at 10:43 AM

    I crown you queen of limericks .....

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    1. indybevOctober 10, 2021 at 11:05 AM

      why thank you, pretty maiden. It came quickly to my mind.

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  5. robkistnerOctober 10, 2021 at 11:39 AM

    I really like the way this turns Bev — well written! 👍🏼🙂

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  6. CharleyOctober 10, 2021 at 3:07 PM

    Formulaic religion and a weighty mortgage undoes true love.

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  7. TruedessaOctober 10, 2021 at 4:43 PM

    ha, well played.

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  8. C. SandlinOctober 10, 2021 at 5:04 PM

    I think I've been watching too many Halloween cartoons--this absolutely bounced along & made me smile. :)

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  9. qbitOctober 10, 2021 at 6:53 PM

    Damn. Hope she was able to get a ride home.

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  10. Marion HortonOctober 11, 2021 at 6:01 AM

    Alas and alack - poor Drusilla ...

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  11. purplepeninportland.comOctober 11, 2021 at 6:14 PM

    Well done, Bev!

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  12. Jewish Young Professional "JYP"November 8, 2021 at 7:39 AM

    A sad tale of heartbreak told in such well-chosen, few words.

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