At dVerse Poetics, we're challenged to
write a poem to save lives. I've written
about a young lady who solved her
career crisis.
Submitted to dVerse Poetics
June 6, 2017
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Once upon a time
In a city far away
There lived a comely lass
Who worked hard for her pay
Sadie was a dancer
Some frowned on her profession
And said that it was shameful
And she’d pay for her transgression
But Sadie turned a deaf ear
To the church ladies’ hue and cry
Each time she danced the night away
She put most of her money by
Sadie had a dream, you see
That in a year to come
The money she’d been putting by
Would be a tidy sum
The years went by and still she danced
And so her fortune grew
She knew one day her time would come
And she’d know just what to do
Just as she planned, the day arrived
Her dream came to fruition
I guess you could say what came next
Was a sort of divine retribution
The owner put the club for sale
And, smiling, Sadie bought it
And step by step her dream came true
Exactly as she’d sought it
She immediately proceeded
With an ambitious renovation
The place became a posh ladies’ club
And something of a local sensation
It catered to wealthy women
Of elegance and class
It promised them their boredom
Would be a thing of the past.
For the healthy price of admission
They could watch some young men dance
And fill their heads with fantasies
Of a secret forbidden romance.
Sadie? She became very rich
A pillar of the community
Hobnobbing with high society
And conducting herself with impunity
But she never forgot from whence she came
Before she achieved her goal
She remembered all those shameful nights
When she’d danced around the pole
And the moral of this story is
If you’re frugal and also wise
You can soar above the ashes
And, like a phoenix, rise
So here’s to the Sadies of the world
With an eye on the straight and narrow
For those with pureness of their soul
His eye is on the sparrow. *
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* A line from an old gospel hymn
of the same name.
I do love a 'Once upon a time', Bev, especially when it's about a dream coming true for a hardworking woman doing her thing!
ReplyDeleteAnd maybe among the men dancing in that club there is a young man who will walk her way up and buy the club from Sadie so she can retire in wealth.
ReplyDeleteHome run! If I could, I'd stuff $100 in Sadie's g-string! Seriously, great verse!
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha. You are the best. :)
DeleteGood advice for the theme of career crisis.
ReplyDeleteWhat a super, uplifting tale. Sadie (and Bev), you go, Girl!
ReplyDeleteWONDERFUL. Rhyme serves you so well here.
ReplyDeleteThe ending gave me chills. This is an awesome story.
ReplyDeleteYou really had me smiling through the middle:
"The place became a posh ladies’ club
And something of a local sensation
It catered to wealthy women
Of elegance and class
It promised them their boredom
Would be a thing of the past."
A fantasy for sure, but a bright metaphor for the unhappy many who labor at something less than joyful, clear-eyed & resolute, saving toward a brighter future; nice.
ReplyDeleteFun story! Actually what a great short story this would make! You go on and get it, Sadie!
ReplyDeleteWhat a breathtaking piece, well done. Warm greetings!
ReplyDeleteVery entertaining and well composed tale. (with a valuable message to boot)
ReplyDeleteAn uplifting piece!
ReplyDeleteLove the narrative. Frugality has its dividends.
ReplyDeleteThank you, you put a smile on my face! Lovely work!
ReplyDeleteSadie deserved every moment of her happiness. Good on her!
ReplyDeleteLovely rhythym in this poem - danceresque!
ReplyDeleteSo fun to read. A great movie this would make.
ReplyDeleteA very fun "once upon a time" poem! Here's to the Sadies of the world, sliding on poles late at night. May their dreams come true!
ReplyDeleteInteresting story...wonderfully told!
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