Kim asks us to write a poem of exactly 44 words
(not counting title), including the word pepper
for this week's quadrille.
Submitted to dVerse Quadrille #24
June 19, 2017
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Pepper me some kindness
Pepper me some joy
Hide daily papers
They only annoy
Pepper me some happy
Pepper me serenity
A modicum of peace
A dose of tranquility
Pepper me some calm
In the midst of madness
Pepper me whatever
Brings on gladness.
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Very nice!
ReplyDeleteI want whatever pepper brings on gladness as well. Nice sound.
ReplyDeleteI love this poem! calm in midst of madness is the order of the day
ReplyDeleteI am so with you, Beverly. I can't listen to news anymore. It feels as though life as I've always known it has imploded.
ReplyDeletePepper me some kindness
ReplyDeletePepper me some joy
Hide daily papers
They only annoy
This is like a pepper prayer, Bev!
'Pepper me whatever
Brings on gladness'.
I'll take some too :)
ReplyDeleteI really love the joyfulness of this... superb
ReplyDeleteCompletely delightful! And I agree about the papers.
ReplyDeleteAmen!❤️ Such a heartfelt write!
ReplyDeleteJust watching the news. This pretty well sums it up.
ReplyDeleteFor sure, Beverly. I could go for all that. Reading the daily paper is scarier now days than a Stephen King novel. I turn away from it a lot. Think the papers were better when there were more funnies, eh?
ReplyDeleteSending you peppers and peppers of joy and love and happiness ~ Have a peppery good week ~
ReplyDeleteLove this! I'm also a big fan of hiding the papers and turning off the news.
ReplyDeleteGreat mantra and message in this piece. Well done.
ReplyDeletepepper me with luck and optimism too. nice write :)
ReplyDeleteOh yes the news is depressing all around! Need more than a pinch of happy!
ReplyDeleteI like the rhyme and repetition...your "pepper me" poem brings a smile :)
ReplyDeleteYes, the world seems drained of its blue sky these days. Nice reflection on our times.
ReplyDeleteI'll gladly take this kind of pepper every day! :)
ReplyDeleteAnd I'll have some of that, too!
ReplyDeleteThis flows so nicely Beverley...I like this use of the word pepper very much...and the wish to have moments of peace and gladness free of the sadness on the news.
ReplyDeleteLove the "Pepper me" structure and repetition!
ReplyDeletePepper me some calm
ReplyDeleteIn the midst of madness
How one needs to pray for some peace in the painful days of conflict in the present times!
Hank
Love this! Such a happy piece! Gray rhyme and rhythm too
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the use of the word pepper and the rhyme.
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